About "Immortal Destiny: The Beginning"

Okay, so i'm going to be making a story that is the intro to DarkFlame911's story, Blood, Lust, and Fear. I've only done 2 chapters so far

Behind brown eyes.

Tears stream down her pale face, as she blinks her brown eyes. She looks down at her hands; they shake with fear. She is at a loss of words, because she knows it is happening again. Five whole days of nothing. No message, no call, no hope. What am i gonna do? She looks down at his name, waiting. Just hoping that he might logg on in those few seconds. But nothing, his name remains unlit. More tears. Why does it have to be like this? I just want him to check on me. She click's on his name, which takes her to his profile. Same ol' same ol', weird status', random posts of his crazy idea's. She sighs, I miss him. A new chat pops up, it's her friend Steven. He talks about his love life, then asks about hers. She gulps and tries to hold back her tears. I hate him! I hate him so much! Why can't he just get on!? She thinks of all the horrible things, like how they can never spend time together, and how they rarely speak. No one understands what i go through everyday. Does anyone really know what it feels like to miss someone? She begins to feel the anger build inside of her. Most of the time i forget he is even alive. HA, call me crazy. How can i hold on to someone, who is never there? I want our relationship back. I want to feel his heart beat beneath my head. I want to hold his warmth under my arms. I want to laugh at his jokes, and smile at his mistakes. I want to look into those beautiful blue eyes, and tell him that i love him. She sits back in her chair. No, No! I take it back. I don't want anything to do with him. Nothing more, because im tired of being left here. So im done. She goes through her thoughts, one more time. She looks back down at his name, which is still unlit, and exits out of the window. She wipes the tears from her eyes, and walks to her room.
Goodnight. Only the walls around her, hear her sobs through the night. Only they know.